Alex's 2nd Response

Sam,

I think you have a lot to work with in this topic, I think there should be a ton of info for this issue. I like how you have developed your own opinions to the problems like an example, GREED! I think you have a good understanding of this topic, but I get a little lost in some of your notes and responses, you might want to give more of a broad response and then get into the details. That way, some people can understand what you are responding to and will understand it more. I like how you have chosen a topic that is relevant to this time period! I'm sure you have a lot of info!! Excellent Job!!

Elliot's Second Response

You're off to a great start Sammy. You really sound like you know what you're taking about, as well as being very interested in your topic. Your responses are very detailed and extremely factual. I think you are on the right track, but I wonder if you will be able to find a constant stream of new information, further down the road. I also really likehow your responses are fairly short, but amazingly in depth and to the point. Good work and good luck!

2nd Response.

Sam-
It seems like you are very interested in your topic and are learning a lot from researching it. I had heard about the fall of AIG, but had never really thought about it in depth. It also seems like you are finding good articles to research, and your responses seem clear and concise, along with your data notes.
-Sophie